Your class will be writing one or two paragraph(s) as a class group for the story (not one paragraph per student). The first class will write the intro paragraph(s). Then the next class will read the paragraph(s) and decide how they want to continue the story. This will continue until the last class on the list writes the ending and gives the story a title. Your paragraph(s) will be typed onto this Wiki page. You will add the 3 pictures to the wiki after your class writes your paragraph(s). The pictures should illustrate events in the section that your class wrote.
Teacher
Grade
School
Town (County)
Paragraph Start Date
Paragraph Completion Date
Magdalena Pysklo
5
St. Thomas the Apostle School
Bloomfield (Essex)
Completed (working on drawings)
Jenna Ross
5
St. Peter Academy
River Edge (Bergen)
4/13/16
4/14/2016
Kim Fiore
5
Trinity Academy
Caldwell (Essex)
4/28/2016
4/29/2016
Brittany McFarlane
6
Our Lady of the Lake School
Verona (Essex)
5/10/2016
5/10/2016
Back to the Past
In a small town in Wisconsin lived two special eleven year old twins Fernando and Kaya. Their super powers made them able to time travel with the help of their trusty sidekick gerbil named Milk. They lived alone in a small tree house in the outskirts of town. They lived alone because they lost their parents 5 years ago in a tragic car accident. Ever since that time their mission has been to travel to the date when they lost their parents and save them. This may sound like an easy job for two super heroes but the evil butler and his army of evil hamsters are trying to stop them.
The evil butler, Dr. Hamsterton was known for hunting down children. The children that he captured were quickly turned into his minion hamsters. His army of hamsters has the ability to morph into any object or being that their General commands. General Fluffy Pants is the head of the hamster army. He and his army are the most powerful beings in the universe, or so he thought.
One day, while Fernando and Kaya were discussing a new plan to save their parents, one of Dr. Hamsterton’s minions was in the woods gathering food. Milk spotted the minion and quickly ran to tell Fernando and Kaya. Fernando and Kaya captured the minion. The minion, Zach was so scared, he told Fernando and Kaya about Dr. Hamsterton’s master plan. Dr. Hamsterson plans to have a massive air strike. His air strike consists of his new invention that will make everyone dizzy and eventually puts them to sleep. While everyone is asleep, they will be turned into hamster minions too. His most prized target is Fernando, Kaya and Milk. But Milk had a plan…
Milk wanted to protect Fernando and Kaya so he went to the forest and found more hamster minions. He pushed them until they confessed where General Fluffy Pant’s secret lair is! One hamster broke, and he said ‘’Um it’s by the vegetable patch. You need to pull a certain turnip and you will find what you’re looking for, yup yup.’’ Milk went to get Fernando and Kaya. They rushed to the vegetable patch and tried all the turnips. Milk tripped over a turnip, but it was actually the secret lever. They had to go in…
Dr. Hamsterton was waiting for the group to arrive. Dr. Hamsterton tries to capture Milk, but Kaya traps Dr.Hamsterton instead. He squirms trying to get out. Quick on his feet, Milk attacks and sits on Dr. Hamsterton. Kaya and Fernando have a great idea! They use their time travel power to transport Dr. Hamsterton to another galaxy so that he could never hurt another person again. However, as Kaya and Fernando prepare to transport Dr. Hamsterton, Fernando sneezes on Dr. Hamsterton by accident. In the process, Fernando passes the transportation power to Dr. Hamsterton. Then Kaya and Fernando realize that Milk was sitting on top of Dr. Hamsterton when they transported him. The children thought they would never see Milk again. As the children were weeping, they heard Milk’s familiar squeal. They looked up and saw Milk with their parents. Kaya and Fernando rush to hug their dear loved ones. Milk then explains his exciting story. Milk uses his time travel ability and saves Kaya and Fernando’s parents. However, Milk must take their place in the past. Milk then evaporates into thin air as he returns to the past. Milk sacrificed himself for his friends’ happiness. The family carves Milk’s name into a nearby bolder to memorialize him. Kaya, Fernando, and their parents head home. A few hours later, Dr. Hamsterton appears out of thin air next to Milk’s memorial. He learned that he had the ability to time travel. “Guess who’s baaaaaaack???!” and Dr. Hamsterton lives to rule another day.
Back to the Past
In a small town in Wisconsin lived two special eleven year old twins Fernando and Kaya. Their super powers made them able to time travel with the help of their trusty sidekick gerbil named Milk. They lived alone in a small tree house in the outskirts of town. They lived alone because they lost their parents 5 years ago in a tragic car accident. Ever since that time their mission has been to travel to the date when they lost their parents and save them. This may sound like an easy job for two super heroes but the evil butler and his army of evil hamsters are trying to stop them.
The evil butler, Dr. Hamsterton was known for hunting down children. The children that he captured were quickly turned into his minion hamsters. His army of hamsters has the ability to morph into any object or being that their General commands. General Fluffy Pants is the head of the hamster army. He and his army are the most powerful beings in the universe, or so he thought.
One day, while Fernando and Kaya were discussing a new plan to save their parents, one of Dr. Hamsterton’s minions was in the woods gathering food. Milk spotted the minion and quickly ran to tell Fernando and Kaya. Fernando and Kaya captured the minion. The minion, Zach was so scared, he told Fernando and Kaya about Dr. Hamsterton’s master plan. Dr. Hamsterson plans to have a massive air strike. His air strike consists of his new invention that will make everyone dizzy and eventually puts them to sleep. While everyone is asleep, they will be turned into hamster minions too. His most prized target is Fernando, Kaya and Milk. But Milk had a plan…
Milk wanted to protect Fernando and Kaya so he went to the forest and found more hamster minions. He pushed them until they confessed where General Fluffy Pant’s secret lair is! One hamster broke, and he said ‘’Um it’s by the vegetable patch. You need to pull a certain turnip and you will find what you’re looking for, yup yup.’’ Milk went to get Fernando and Kaya. They rushed to the vegetable patch and tried all the turnips. Milk tripped over a turnip, but it was actually the secret lever. They had to go in…